تكفون الي عندهم لغه اتمنى تشوفون Statement of Purpose of study كذا صحيح او فيه اخطاء

احتاج مساعده منكم وياليت احد يرد علي رد شافي

انا الان ادرس في معهد بس ابي احول من معهدي الحالي لمعهد تابع ل East Tennessee State University واخذت قبول لمعهدهم بس ابي اقدم على الجامعه
والان تواجهني مشكلتين اولا انا لغتي للحين ماهي قويه وكتبت الغرض من الدراسه ( Statement of Purpose for MS in Chemistry ) ومحتاجه مساعده تكفون الي عنده لغه ياليت يقولي اذا فيه اخطاء ولى تمام
المشكله الثانيه اني ابي منهم قبول غير مشروط الا بالدراسه بمعهدهم يعني بدون شرط توفل وجيمات هل اذكر هالشيء في Statement of Purpose of study ولى حتكون نقطه سلبيه ونقص ممكن انرفض بسببه ياليت تقولولي وش اطلب منهم اذا ابي ابي قبول غير مشروط بحيث اني ادرس بمعهدهم ودايركت ابدا بالجامعه

وهذي الصيغه اتمنى تشوفون اذا فيها اخطاء وهل فيه شيء المفروض احذفه او ازيده..

((It is my pleasure to introduce myself to the admission committee. My name is xxxxxxxx, I am from Saudi Arabia. I graduated with a BS degree in chemistry in 2007 from Tabuk University in Tabuk , Saudi Arabia with GPA (82.08% of 100). I am an applicant interested in studying Chemistry at your University for the Masters Degree starting in 2014 and I have a scholarship from the Ministry of Higher Education to pursue my graduate study in the U.S

My English is not good but will study intensive Academy course at the Institute of ELS to East Tennessee State University
Student ID: XXXX
Will begin studying in classes 24 June, 2013 in Johnson City

WHY CHEMISTRY :
I have been interested in sciences since my childhood. I wondered at the astronomical number of compounds that carbon forms, which inspired me to choose Chemistry as my major field of study in my Master of Science. As a part of this interest only I choose to study Chemistry at undergraduate level. My academic performance was good & this acted as a booster &made me look at future with confidence & excitement. My schooling provided me with the much needed information for a scientific approach in life. I learned that just having interest is not sufficient & that it needs to be supplemented with hardwork & determination to succeed .Chemistry has gained prominence over these years, as this branch has undergone technical innovations and enrichments. Newer instrumental techniques have undoubtedly added immensely to penetrative chemical estimations. The processes used for the estimation of the compounds require high sophistication and skill. Over the past years of my study I am introduced to different topics of Chemistry, I have spent good deal of time learning seperative techniques like solvent extraction, ion exchange, chromatography and also I an familiar with the basic principles-spectroscopy ( UV, Visible, IR), Conductometry , gas analysis .I have a familiar and interest in Organic Reaction Mechanisms and Molecular Orbital Theory for Organic Chemistry . I hope my research be in the above aspects.
I have the desire and the will power to complete the program and self-motivated . I truly enjoy working in the lab and I want to make a difference in chemistry by
continuing to do research. When I am in the lab and I figure out something new is
what I thrive for. We do live in a changing world, when the old certainties are
changing, and we see the emergence of new forces, new influences.

CAREER OBJECTIVE:
I plan to be a member of the faculty of the Academy in One of my country universities or work as a research professional or work in an Industry that can allow me to explore and experiment, helping in the development of novel vistas in the field of study


REASONS FOR SELECTING YOUR UNIVERSITY :

On careful study of the college, website and its appropriate superiors advising for it, I have found that the graduate program suits my needs perfectly and active research is in accordance with my interest. Together with its eminent faculty, excellent research facilities, pleasant university ambience and balanced academic program, I feel that your university is the right place to embark upon my graduate study and feel that a Master's program in Chemistry will go a long way in preparing me
for a successful career in the Chemistry. I am confident that I will live up to the high academic standards of your university supported by your able academic guidance. I believe that enrollment at your university will satiate my thirst for the subject and provide an opportunity to scale the ladder of success, I am sure it will provide me the impetus to strive ceaselessly to attain my cherished goals. Coming to my personality, I assure you that I have necessary commitment, intelligence, maturity and determination to achieve my goals
. My strengths are conceptual understanding, self confidence, hardworking and optimism. I am sure that exposure to cutting edge facilities, interaction with renowned faculty at your institution will help develop my knowledge and versatility and help me to face stiff global competition. It would be a great privilege to be able to do my graduate studies at University East Tennessee State and I am quite confident that I will match the high standards set by your university.))

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