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  1. الصورة الرمزية ASEEL2
    ASEEL2

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    • Dec 2007
    المزيدl

    August 19th, 2009, 01:08 AM

    Hello everybody,

    Two days ago I started preparing for the IELTS test.

    I have an idea for the writing section task 2 which I believe it is useful for
    us

    I will post one topic here , and think about and give it a great thoughts then start writing

    Here we go the first one

    Some people prefer to work for themselves or own a business. Others prefer to work for an employer. Would you rather be self-employed, work for someone else, or own a business? Use specific reasons to explain your choice..


    I will be looking forward to hearing from you.

    Best Wishes

  2. المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ASEEL2

    Some people prefer to work for themselves or own a business. Others prefer to work for an employer. Would you rather be self-employed, work for someone else, or own a business? Use specific reasons to explain your choice..



    المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Irish
    Hello there


    Great step to improve our writing
    I will be right back with a brilliant essay.So wait for me



    BRB
    Thank you for being interested in joining this subject

    I have already written the frist essay, it is a perfect one because I gave it
    my teacher who is a native speaker


    I would prefer to work for myself or own a business rather than working for someone else. The two most important factors for my work experiences are making profit and being more independent in work. When I create my own corporation, I will make more money. I usually feel comfortable when I work by myself.
    I will not make more investment unless I own a corporation. The money that I will make; will not be shared with anyone. For example, last year, I was selling some (but any example from you mind). At the time I sold ( abut any example from you mind) for eight hundred Saudi Riyals which equaled about three hundred dollars at that time. I was able to keep all the profit from these sales and this was appealing. Furthermore; I will sell my own merchandise in my own way. For instance, if I had traded in selling used cars, I would have put advertisements everywhere I could, such as on the internet, on the board commercial. By using these techniques, I would have made more money than through being employed by some company.
    The other critical factor for me to choose working by myself is that I will not get stressed out. One motivation is no one can blame me for insignificant mistakes I make. Two years ago I was working as ( but ant example from your mind)where one of the ( same )had technical problems. At that time, my boss came and told me that I was a lazy worker. As a result of this, I got nervous and angry as well. This is never going to occur if I work by myself. Demanding a lot of tasks is another stress which will make me feel uncomfortable at a job. A friend of mine had a very strict supervisor who demanded him to do daily reports and wanted him to hand in these reports exactly on time. This made my friend very stressed
    When I have my own business, I will make money. When I am self-employed, I will feel more comfortable and independent. There are a number of elements that I have to consider for my future work; such as making profit and feeling relaxed. For similar reasons as my explanations and illustrations, many people around the world attempt to start their own business each day


    Kind wishes
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